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	<title>Comments on: Summer Returns</title>
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	<description>Reflections of a working writer and reader</description>
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		<title>By: Bill Liversidge</title>
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		<dc:creator>Bill Liversidge</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 12 Jul 2008 09:10:01 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi John

Enjoy your break - you&#039;ve certainly earned it; your blog is consistently informative and entertaining.

I recently read &quot;White Skin Man&quot; which has one of the most gripping starts of any book I have read - a really good read.  Earlier this week I finished &quot;Walking With Ghosts&quot; which I thought was even better.  Thoughtful, richly textured, moving and intelligent.  One of the best thrillers (although it&#039;s much more than that) I&#039;ve ever read.

Start the next one when you&#039;re ready - it&#039;ll be worth the wait.  For both of us.

Bill

&lt;strong&gt;jb says&lt;/strong&gt;: Thanks, Bill. It really makes a difference when people take time out to say something nice about the work.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi John</p>
<p>Enjoy your break &#8211; you&#8217;ve certainly earned it; your blog is consistently informative and entertaining.</p>
<p>I recently read &#8220;White Skin Man&#8221; which has one of the most gripping starts of any book I have read &#8211; a really good read.  Earlier this week I finished &#8220;Walking With Ghosts&#8221; which I thought was even better.  Thoughtful, richly textured, moving and intelligent.  One of the best thrillers (although it&#8217;s much more than that) I&#8217;ve ever read.</p>
<p>Start the next one when you&#8217;re ready &#8211; it&#8217;ll be worth the wait.  For both of us.</p>
<p>Bill</p>
<p><strong>jb says</strong>: Thanks, Bill. It really makes a difference when people take time out to say something nice about the work.</p>
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		<title>By: Iain Rowan</title>
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		<dc:creator>Iain Rowan</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 11 Jul 2008 20:36:24 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Sounds a grand summer, John, with family, friends and some time for quiet and reflection. Enjoy!

&lt;strong&gt;jb says&lt;/strong&gt;: Thanks, Iain. I can barely wait. . .</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Sounds a grand summer, John, with family, friends and some time for quiet and reflection. Enjoy!</p>
<p><strong>jb says</strong>: Thanks, Iain. I can barely wait. . .</p>
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		<title>By: Paul</title>
		<link>http://johnbakersblog.co.uk/summer-returns/comment-page-1/#comment-109792</link>
		<dc:creator>Paul</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 10 Jul 2008 07:47:54 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I used to have a method which seemed to be outline - write the whole thing - edit/rewrite. The part I really enjoy is the editing (how perverse is that). For me it&#039;s in the editing that the characters acquire some depth, and I can play with pace; weave in some sub-plots, develop a sense of time and place etc. With the current book I&#039;m trying to edit as I write and I&#039;m not sure that it&#039;s working.
Have a seriously good break John - May it bring you all that you expect/hope for, and more.
p.s. Read a little of the extract which drew me in quickly - saving the rest for later.

&lt;strong&gt;jb says&lt;/strong&gt;: Thanks Paul. I&#039;ve used both methods and wouldn&#039;t be able to choose between them. Maybe the novel itself dictates the method by which it is to come into the world. Mysteries. I also enjoy editing, I believe because I know much more about the characters and what drives them by that stage. I know how far I can go with them, what they may be capable of.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I used to have a method which seemed to be outline &#8211; write the whole thing &#8211; edit/rewrite. The part I really enjoy is the editing (how perverse is that). For me it&#8217;s in the editing that the characters acquire some depth, and I can play with pace; weave in some sub-plots, develop a sense of time and place etc. With the current book I&#8217;m trying to edit as I write and I&#8217;m not sure that it&#8217;s working.<br />
Have a seriously good break John &#8211; May it bring you all that you expect/hope for, and more.<br />
p.s. Read a little of the extract which drew me in quickly &#8211; saving the rest for later.</p>
<p><strong>jb says</strong>: Thanks Paul. I&#8217;ve used both methods and wouldn&#8217;t be able to choose between them. Maybe the novel itself dictates the method by which it is to come into the world. Mysteries. I also enjoy editing, I believe because I know much more about the characters and what drives them by that stage. I know how far I can go with them, what they may be capable of.</p>
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		<title>By: Jim Murdoch</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jim Murdoch</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 09 Jul 2008 14:45:47 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>When I first started to read this post I assumed you were off to Scandinavia TO write. There are times I wish I could seclude myself away for a few weeks. Just to get the guts written. Or skeleton, to be more accurate. That&#039;s how I work, get my characters from A to wherever B ends up being as quickly as possible and then I can flesh out the story in bits and pieces over time. At the moment I have a pair of very fine, if a little bony, legs and a decent pelvis but that&#039;s my lot. The backbone is proving to be a real bitch.

Have a good time. Enjoy the fresh air. Do find time for a few more café stories. And, yes, for God&#039;s sake ditch that Kronus title.

&lt;strong&gt;jb says&lt;/strong&gt;: Thanks for that, Jim. I think I need more than a skeleton. I get the chronology down and have to feel comfortable with at least one character. All through the process I have to be able to hear echoes coming and going and not stray too far from the central metaphor. The latter stages involve detecting which parts aren&#039;t working and need fixing and identifying the parts that aren&#039;t working and need ditching.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>When I first started to read this post I assumed you were off to Scandinavia TO write. There are times I wish I could seclude myself away for a few weeks. Just to get the guts written. Or skeleton, to be more accurate. That&#8217;s how I work, get my characters from A to wherever B ends up being as quickly as possible and then I can flesh out the story in bits and pieces over time. At the moment I have a pair of very fine, if a little bony, legs and a decent pelvis but that&#8217;s my lot. The backbone is proving to be a real bitch.</p>
<p>Have a good time. Enjoy the fresh air. Do find time for a few more café stories. And, yes, for God&#8217;s sake ditch that Kronus title.</p>
<p><strong>jb says</strong>: Thanks for that, Jim. I think I need more than a skeleton. I get the chronology down and have to feel comfortable with at least one character. All through the process I have to be able to hear echoes coming and going and not stray too far from the central metaphor. The latter stages involve detecting which parts aren&#8217;t working and need fixing and identifying the parts that aren&#8217;t working and need ditching.</p>
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