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	<title>Comments on: Learning to Write XXXI</title>
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		<title>By: Thomas McCay</title>
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		<dc:creator>Thomas McCay</dc:creator>
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		<description>&lt;p&gt;I recently had a very bitter experience with the subject of this post.  When I doggedly finished my first detective novel I found that the lead character was the least interesting character in the book.  I didn&#039;t actually care what happened to him.  The villains and the side kicks were much more interesting than the main character.  I and my couple of readers cared more about the hero&#039;s driver than we did about the bloody &#039;hero&#039;.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;I fear I kilt my baby and buried it in a deep dark drawer.  I did not make the same mistake with my second baby.  Many new mistakes but not that particular one.  Characters must pay their way and they must have a solid reason for hanging on as more than &#039;background performers&#039;.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;New Reader, love this blog thanks.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;strong&gt;jb says&lt;/strong&gt;: Hi Thomas, thanks for the contribution. It&#039;s true that there&#039;s no better teacher than experience, though he can be a very hard master sometimes.
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I recently had a very bitter experience with the subject of this post.  When I doggedly finished my first detective novel I found that the lead character was the least interesting character in the book.  I didn&#8217;t actually care what happened to him.  The villains and the side kicks were much more interesting than the main character.  I and my couple of readers cared more about the hero&#8217;s driver than we did about the bloody &#8216;hero&#8217;.</p>
<p>I fear I kilt my baby and buried it in a deep dark drawer.  I did not make the same mistake with my second baby.  Many new mistakes but not that particular one.  Characters must pay their way and they must have a solid reason for hanging on as more than &#8216;background performers&#8217;.</p>
<p>New Reader, love this blog thanks.</p>
<p><strong>jb says</strong>: Hi Thomas, thanks for the contribution. It&#8217;s true that there&#8217;s no better teacher than experience, though he can be a very hard master sometimes.</p>
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