Comments on: Learning to Write XXIII http://johnbakersblog.co.uk/learning-to-write-xxiii/ Reflections of a working writer and reader Mon, 06 Feb 2012 15:06:05 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: a certain sinclair http://johnbakersblog.co.uk/learning-to-write-xxiii/comment-page-1/#comment-31566 a certain sinclair Sat, 24 Feb 2007 23:12:43 +0000 http://johnbakersblog.co.uk/learning-to-write-xxiii/#comment-31566 * 'The second young man is also conscripted in 1914' Sorry John, don't want to be a pain, but he wouldn't have been conscripted in 1914; the Conscription Act wasn't brought in until 1916. <strong>jb says</strong>: Thanks for that, William. One of the things I learned very early on in this game . . . everyone needs a good editor. * ‘The second young man is also conscripted in 1914′ Sorry John, don’t want to be a pain, but he wouldn’t have been conscripted in 1914; the Conscription Act wasn’t brought in until 1916.

jb says: Thanks for that, William. One of the things I learned very early on in this game . . . everyone needs a good editor.

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