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	<title>Comments on: Creating a Text &#8211; Jason Evans</title>
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	<description>Reflections of a working writer and reader</description>
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		<title>By: Matt</title>
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		<dc:creator>Matt</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 20 Mar 2009 05:38:10 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I like what you wrote about having to draw  the person in from the first paragraph. I like to read, and when I do read something, I really enjoy when I pick up the book and lose all sense of my surroundings.  This doesn&#039;t happen often, but when it does, I&#039;m in heaven!

&lt;strong&gt;jb says&lt;/strong&gt;: I think we all know what you mean, Matt.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I like what you wrote about having to draw  the person in from the first paragraph. I like to read, and when I do read something, I really enjoy when I pick up the book and lose all sense of my surroundings.  This doesn&#8217;t happen often, but when it does, I&#8217;m in heaven!</p>
<p><strong>jb says</strong>: I think we all know what you mean, Matt.</p>
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		<title>By: dino delellis</title>
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		<dc:creator>dino delellis</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 14 Dec 2008 08:39:46 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Wow , thanks for this article , this helps me with my writings as well.

My biggest weakness is how to give more meat to the story , What scenes to put as in betweeners , and how to make them interesting and the same time relevant to the overall flow to the story.

&lt;strong&gt;jb says&lt;/strong&gt;: You might find my series on &lt;a href=&quot;http://johnbakersblog.co.uk/learning-to-write-i/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;learning to write&lt;/a&gt; interesting.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Wow , thanks for this article , this helps me with my writings as well.</p>
<p>My biggest weakness is how to give more meat to the story , What scenes to put as in betweeners , and how to make them interesting and the same time relevant to the overall flow to the story.</p>
<p><strong>jb says</strong>: You might find my series on <a href="http://johnbakersblog.co.uk/learning-to-write-i/">learning to write</a> interesting.</p>
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		<title>By: Charlotte</title>
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		<dc:creator>Charlotte</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 29 Jul 2007 08:47:27 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>John, I&#039;m delurking after many months to say how much I&#039;m enjoying this series. It&#039;s wonderful to have practical insights into how other writers work.

I love what Jason says here about his process, especially how, at the end, if he can read it like a reader then he knows it&#039;s complete.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>John, I&#8217;m delurking after many months to say how much I&#8217;m enjoying this series. It&#8217;s wonderful to have practical insights into how other writers work.</p>
<p>I love what Jason says here about his process, especially how, at the end, if he can read it like a reader then he knows it&#8217;s complete.</p>
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