Comments on: Church Newsletters – Proof-Reader Wanted http://johnbakersblog.co.uk/church-newsletters-proof-reader-wanted/ Reflections of a working writer and reader Mon, 06 Feb 2012 15:06:05 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.1 By: Proofreaders http://johnbakersblog.co.uk/church-newsletters-proof-reader-wanted/comment-page-1/#comment-111596 Proofreaders Sun, 22 Nov 2009 21:12:39 +0000 http://johnbakersblog.co.uk/church-newsletters-proof-reader-wanted/#comment-111596 Seems to be a quite a few errors in there and I would say that some parts should be re-written to make a little more sense. I had to laugh at 4 - who are sick of the community, do you put your hand up? It may be better written as 'sick in the community'. Seems to be a quite a few errors in there and I would say that some parts should be re-written to make a little more sense.

I had to laugh at 4 – who are sick of the community, do you put your hand up? It may be better written as ‘sick in the community’.

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]]> By: Duncan http://johnbakersblog.co.uk/church-newsletters-proof-reader-wanted/comment-page-1/#comment-101913 Duncan Wed, 12 Dec 2007 18:57:40 +0000 http://johnbakersblog.co.uk/church-newsletters-proof-reader-wanted/#comment-101913 Yeah, you've missed out an 'e' from 'use' in 7. Aside from that, can't see a thing wrong with it.... <strong>jb says</strong>: Duncan, you're a star. I said I needed a proof-reader . . . Yeah, you’ve missed out an ‘e’ from ‘use’ in 7. Aside from that, can’t see a thing wrong with it….

jb says: Duncan, you’re a star. I said I needed a proof-reader . . .

]]> By: Kathleen Maher http://johnbakersblog.co.uk/church-newsletters-proof-reader-wanted/comment-page-1/#comment-101828 Kathleen Maher Wed, 12 Dec 2007 02:16:03 +0000 http://johnbakersblog.co.uk/church-newsletters-proof-reader-wanted/#comment-101828 Personally, I doubt many could improve upon this. The phrasing and word choices are all sublimely witty. And, btw, sign me up for the choir, especially since singing ability goes unmentioned. <strong>jb says</strong>: Ah, Kathleen, have you nothing at all for the rumage sale? Personally, I doubt many could improve upon this. The phrasing and word choices are all sublimely witty. And, btw, sign me up for the choir, especially since singing ability goes unmentioned.

jb says: Ah, Kathleen, have you nothing at all for the rumage sale?

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